Generally I like it, I've revised the text a little, I just felt you had a little too much over clarification and there were a couple of spelling/puncuation mistakes in there too :P What do you think of this?
At HitMe Design Studio we aim to produce visual outcomes that represent our clients in a way that makes them interestingly individual. The work we produce includes any design format, whether it’s creating a website, illustration or a more tactile print based outcome, our team has the range of talents to produce outstanding visual quality.
We all love design, and its wonderful ability to visually communicate a message, but we also love design that is exquisite to the touch, and has the collectability factor – something that is both timeless and cutting edge, something that people want to keep as their own.
We’re a young team of enthusiastic creative minds, each with our own strengths that when brought together make us one powerful design force. Our youthful spirit drives us to experiment constantly, which sparks unique and exciting ways to produce the best visual solutions for our clients.
We like to keep a fun and professional atmosphere in the studio for absolute creativity. Our humourous style and passion for design leaves a positive impression whenever anyone works with us. We want our clients to have fun working with us, and go away with a warm fuzzy feeling, as well as epic design.
Producing an outcome that is relevant to the client’s needs is key, so we like to work closely with our client and find out more than basic information. We’re always keen to sit down and chat with our clients to make sure that they are happy with how things are progressing. Each member of the design team is very friendly and approachable and we all welcome feedback and input from everyone involved in the project.
Our unique approach to design, close collaboration with the client and great teamwork makes HitMe Design Studio one to remember. Our love of interactive, digital and print work gives us the flexibility to produce many visually characteristic designs, for many charismatic clients.
Generally I like it, I've revised the text a little, I just felt you had a little too much over clarification and there were a couple of spelling/puncuation mistakes in there too :P What do you think of this?
ReplyDeleteAt HitMe Design Studio we aim to produce visual outcomes that represent our clients in a way that makes them interestingly individual. The work we produce includes any design format, whether it’s creating a website, illustration or a more tactile print based outcome, our team has the range of talents to produce outstanding visual quality.
We all love design, and its wonderful ability to visually communicate a message, but we also love design that is exquisite to the touch, and has the collectability factor – something that is both timeless and cutting edge, something that people want to keep as their own.
We’re a young team of enthusiastic creative minds, each with our own strengths that when brought together make us one powerful design force. Our youthful spirit drives us to experiment constantly, which sparks unique and exciting ways to produce the best visual solutions for our clients.
We like to keep a fun and professional atmosphere in the studio for absolute creativity. Our humourous style and passion for design leaves a positive impression whenever anyone works with us. We want our clients to have fun working with us, and go away with a warm fuzzy feeling, as well as epic design.
Producing an outcome that is relevant to the client’s needs is key, so we like to work closely with our client and find out more than basic information. We’re always keen to sit down and chat with our clients to make sure that they are happy with how things are progressing. Each member of the design team is very friendly and approachable and we all welcome feedback and input from everyone involved in the project.
Our unique approach to design, close collaboration with the client and great teamwork makes HitMe Design Studio one to remember. Our love of interactive, digital and print work gives us the flexibility to produce many visually characteristic designs, for many charismatic clients.
Sounds great. Really like the changes you've made. They make sense & it sounds better :)
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