Thursday 5 May 2011

5th May Tutorial with Dan - Feedback notes

Here are the notes I took with all the feedback Dan gave us during our last tutorial.

Business Card
Sarah has something to punch round corners, might be useful to ask
Individual business cards - Name, title (e.g. Graphic Designer) and email. Different muted colours with different words on each card.
Remove "We make wonderful tactile design" sentence
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Envelope
"Hit me with..." t-shirt concept would work better on a post card
Scrap inside pattern idea
Origami envelope/post card as one single piece
Have different ones perhaps
Refine and tie in our concepts with the choice of layout
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Letterhead
Positive feedback, but should write something nice to go with it
Consider type
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Website
Experiment with the navigation at the side and top of page
Finalise style and overall layout
"Who are we" instead of just "who"
Talk to Sarah to see what she thinks maybe
2 or 3 word sentence
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T-shirts
Go in a slightly different direction
Consistency with the typography we use
"Cool Stuff" instead of "We're cool stuff"
Cooper Black was a trend
Phone/Business card look as a t-shirt would work and tie in our concepts
"with" is still too big
2 or 3 word sentence
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Presentation
We can use our Tank and Fantastic man posters
We can use an A2 leather portfolio, but it doesn't need to be a leather one. It could be a "book"

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