Tuesday 3 May 2011

3rd May Turorial - Feedback notes

Here are the notes I took with all the feedback Sarah gave us during the tutorial.

Business Card
Space out - More white space
More testing/Experimentation
Scale down image and put on card
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Logo
Brighter blue colours
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Envelope
Make the grey lighter, to match the blue
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Letterhead
Fade/print logo on reverse
Experiment
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Website
Clunky, icons are too big, "drowning the logo"
Use a grid
Simple: Our work should be key and the focus
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T-shirts
Word "With" is too big, think about how it will look on someone wearing it
"We're cool stuff" t-shirt doesn't fit our look
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Our next and final tutorial is Thursday, 5th May at 2.

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